{update} Adore, Adore Part 6

Part 6 of Adore, Adore is live. I’m nervous for this one. It’s a bit different than the rest. You’ll see why soon enough. Enjoy the update!

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Comments (3)

  1. Sarah October 13, 2012 at 6:17 pm

    Absolutely loved the chapter!

    When will the next one be up? I can’t wait for more!!

    X

  2. Claudia Bouffard October 14, 2012 at 11:22 am

    Yes, Yes, Yes! So worth the wait. I just love this story, and I honestly am surprised at how vulnerable Edward seems to be. He may put forth an air of confidence, but it seems deep down, he is very unsure of where he stands in Bella’s eyes. Actually, it seems as if Bella is kicking herself for jumping to far to many conclusions where Edward is concerned. It’s obvious that she would like to spend much more time with Edward, but I guess she is afraid to lay her feelings out there. She most definitely has some self-esteem issues, and I can most assuredly understand her hesitation, but maybe, just maybe, if she loosen up and really listened to some of what Edward is saying, she might see that his aloofness and, what appears to her as over-confidence, is really masking Edward’s insecurities. If they both had the opportunity to take the “masks” off that they wear, they would truly see each other for who they are and what they truly want. Of course I could possibly be completely wrong in these assumptions, but I like to speculate. Once agin, well worth the wait.

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