{update} Adore, Adore Part 5
Part 5 of Adore, Adore is live! Above is a tasty little teaser image. I didn’t even write it into the chapter on purpose! It just worked out perfectly.
I’d tell you that you can find Part 5 here if it ever gets pulled from FFn, but if you’re reading this you probably already know. Looks like I told you anyway. ;)
Thanks @abbrecken for critiquing my smut . . . #melted
Claudia July 3, 2012 at 5:45 pm
Oh……..I was so excited to receive an e-mail that you had updated! I just love this little ditty. Some times I think to myself that I must be out of my mind that I wait with bated breath for you to update this story. It always make me laugh, and at the same time I love their interactions when they are both being truthful and vulnerable–laying it out there without the games. Your story I find is often a nice little smutty escape from real life. LOL.
Anyways, I really enjoyed the interactions these two had; and, I believe that Edward got across to Bella that he did not actually think of her as slutty or promiscious–just what he says in the heat of the moment and just something he says to ramp up the emotion. Rather cute the way he puts forth his feelings of possessive and ownership, and I not sure, but I don’t think he planned on his friend extending an invitation of a threesome. Actually, I found Marc to be extremely rude calling Bella out on her relationship, or lack thereof, with Edward. If he had been so interested in knowing what was between them, why not question them together, and then present the invitation. Possibly Marc is jealous of a blossoming relationship between Edward and Bella. Just saying………
Yeah, it’s a surprise taking her to his parent’s home. La, La, La, La cannot wait to see what happen at his childhood home, and find out the reasoning of bringing Bella there.
Oh my, really good chapter. Thanks.
ooza July 4, 2012 at 3:21 pm
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed the update.